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What Do You Think About The "Career Mode"?  

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Looking good (Y) my dynasty got frozen merely because I got a lot of things to do this days, university and such. But I might continue it some day. The "problem" with it was my approach, I don't feel like playing A-AAA games, should have put him straight to MLB like you did :whistle:

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INKED!

Brian Cashman and the Yankees are proud to sign P George Diaz to a 3 year, 300K contract. "Im so blessed, im so proud of myself."

George Diaz will head to Tampa, aff. of the the Yankees.

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pride, power, pintripes... kinda random. and some sentences are a bit out of place, and incorrect gramatically. oh well, looks great.

Thanks everyone for all the positive things I been getting. Also dude what u expect, i been doing this stuff since 10:40AM. lol

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BREAKING NEWS!

The Yankees have just released Gary Sheffield from the club. Reporters are saying because of playing time, some just say because the Yankees couldn't fit him in the lineup.

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This is fairly good dynasty and idea here. Personally, I would just like to see some improved writing. It is amazing the images evocative diction can conjur.

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Excuse my language, but what did you just say?

He said that it is easier to get an idea of the action if you use better grammar. As you have it now, your grammar is very poor, and it ends up being hard to read. If you have good grammar, the reader can read without having to try interpret your language.

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Im sorry for my grammer, this coming from a Freshman. I want to make everything good for the readers and followers. But if you are just going to ask for one little mistake than I don't know how to solve it.

...And please don't say go to Spelling class, because in NY there is no such thing anymore.

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It's up to you on whether you wanna do it. I like it, maybe if you don't constantly work on it, maybe take it time at a time, it will seem more appealing for you to play through.

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Hey guys what do you think about this "Career Mode" it's getting very boring for me.

I think it's going well, it's just maybe you should slow it down like DUnit said.

You put out a lot of updates today. Maybe put out 1 or 2 updates a day. Take your time so you won't have to hear people complaining about errors on grammar and spelling.

But it's your decision. I think you should keep it going....

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