Dwillisster Posted October 19, 2006 Share Posted October 19, 2006 Hi guys. i have a midterm exam for tomorrow and i have to reduce( make it short) this sentence : The tall cowboy put the saddle on his horse, unitied from the fence, waved goodbye and rode off into the sunset. please help me to make it short( summarize).. thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NYY_rich Posted October 19, 2006 Share Posted October 19, 2006 The tall cowboy rode off into the sunset and waved goodbye after he saddled up and untied his horse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChicagoCubs720 Posted October 19, 2006 Share Posted October 19, 2006 The cowboy waved goodbye as he untied his horse and rode off into the sunset. Does that work? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwillisster Posted October 19, 2006 Author Share Posted October 19, 2006 Has to be more short.. thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amanriquez5 Posted October 19, 2006 Share Posted October 19, 2006 After he saddled up and untied his horse, the tall cowboy rode off into the sunset. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwillisster Posted October 19, 2006 Author Share Posted October 19, 2006 After he saddled up and untied his horse, the tall cowboy rode off into the sunset.Still too long... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fred13 Posted October 19, 2006 Share Posted October 19, 2006 After saddling up his horse, the tall coybow waved goodbye as he rode into the sunset. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheNateGBent Posted October 19, 2006 Share Posted October 19, 2006 The cowboy readied his horse and left. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwillisster Posted October 19, 2006 Author Share Posted October 19, 2006 After saddling up his horse, the tall coybow waved goodbye as he rode into the sunset.Still to long.. make it a short sentece.. thanks and sorry to bother you guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwillisster Posted October 19, 2006 Author Share Posted October 19, 2006 The cowboy readied his horse and left. I THINK YOU GOT IT.. but ?readied? what u mean with the word readied? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tebjr Posted October 19, 2006 Share Posted October 19, 2006 as in he got it ready to ride. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fred13 Posted October 19, 2006 Share Posted October 19, 2006 I THINK YOU GOT IT.. but ?readied? what u mean with the word readied? that is just a word that can replace "sadlled up and untied". Its the same ase "prepared". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Timp Posted October 19, 2006 Share Posted October 19, 2006 I THINK YOU GOT IT.. but ?readied? what u mean with the word readied? I think by readied he means like he made the horse ready to ride. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwillisster Posted October 19, 2006 Author Share Posted October 19, 2006 Ok ..i'm going to use that one.. The cowboy readied his horse and left. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarkB Posted October 20, 2006 Share Posted October 20, 2006 Welcome to the MVPMods Homework Help section. Whatever happened to asking your parents or friends for advice? Asking your teacher for a further explanation or help? Fish for a man and he'll be able to feed himself for the day. Teach a man how to fish and he'll be able to feed himself and his family for evermore. (Oh, and personally, I'd prefer "The cowboy fucked off on his horse", but that would mainly be to bug the living crap out of the school staff. ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Totte Posted October 20, 2006 Share Posted October 20, 2006 (Oh, and personally, I'd prefer "The cowboy **** off on his horse", but that would mainly be to bug the living crap out of the school staff. ) Co-signed :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstroEric Posted October 20, 2006 Share Posted October 20, 2006 I'm not quite sure what you've blanked out there, but we composition teachers are always tempted to use the old example of, "I helped my uncle Jack off a horse," to stress the importance of proofreading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fred13 Posted October 20, 2006 Share Posted October 20, 2006 What would happen if Mark B were to be one of AstroEric's students? hmm... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarkB Posted October 20, 2006 Share Posted October 20, 2006 One of the best teacher/student combinations in history, I think. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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