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New York Yankees - Rebuilding The Next Generation


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how can there be an improvement in presentation?

this is top-notch stuff geolink, nice dynasty, even though its my most hated team in sports history lol

yeah well this team has it's ups and downs.

I want people to get a better feeling on this dynasty.

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New York - Mussina was awful even from the start. Allowing 5 runs, 7 hits and pitched a total of 6 innings. "My stuff wasn't there and I was disgusting, this isn't the way I wanted to start my season." Joe Torre called Mussina quits after 6 long innings, "I just wanted to see if he can re-bound back but that wasn't the case." But that was the case to Baltimore Orioles pitcher, Adam Loewen. "Pitched my best, I hope I can keep this up." Yankees commited no errors and a big homerun by Alex Rodriguez. Could his 3 game slump be over? Rodriguez, came into this game with .83 AVG and 1 RBI. "It's good I helped the team, but we just wanted to get the win... it's very early into the season, tommorrow is another game."[/align]

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New York - Kei Igawa's major league debut was nothing but trouble. He first throws a wild pitch at Brian Roberts that almost shadders his head in half, throw too many pitches. But nothing short-lived then his Yankee debut. The biggest mistake was putting in Scott Proctor too pitch in the 7th inning. "My mistake, my bad" commented the helpless Proctor. "We had a chance to score, we had a rally as a matter of fact in the 9th inning but Melky choosed the wrong timing to steal a base." the captain Derek Jeter commented.

As for Joe Torre, he looked as dead as anyone in bullpen relief.

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What did you do to the BG on that?

no background used. just cutout Alex and then pasted him back on there and then the other Alex in the back I just fooled around with it. Added little sharpness to the glove... and wha-la!

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I like it, but the terrible grammar and spelling errors really detract from the presentation. If you can improve on them, this should be a solid dynasty.

Good luck. :)

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I like the presentation but Mark's right, you gotta fix up the grammar. Just put your paragraphs on Word or something and use spellcheck so it looks neater.

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