RaysFTW Posted January 1, 2008 Share Posted January 1, 2008 These are not my designs, but I intend on finishing these. Take a look and see if you like. I could use some feedback, suggestions, requests, or anything else. Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
apridham Posted January 1, 2008 Share Posted January 1, 2008 I am correct in assuming that you have permission to finish these off? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fred13 Posted January 1, 2008 Share Posted January 1, 2008 both hiheat and KC have done script tutorials in their respective threads, I'd suggest looking those up and utilizing their advice. It looks better than simply pasting an image over top of the uniform. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
apridham Posted January 1, 2008 Share Posted January 1, 2008 Especially the bottom one. It covers over the buttons. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RaysFTW Posted January 1, 2008 Author Share Posted January 1, 2008 both hiheat and KC have done script tutorials in their respective threads, I'd suggest looking those up and utilizing their advice. It looks better than simply pasting an image over top of the uniform. Alright, I'll take a look at them. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redsox Posted January 1, 2008 Share Posted January 1, 2008 I think the jersey colors (especially for the Royals and the Rays) should be much lighter compared to the undershirts. I think going with a white color would make it look much better. Also as fred13 suggested spice up the script by adding some textures. Check out the tutorial in progress by hiheat. One last thing - on the second screen, the white bar should be right above the color layer on the template. That way you can see the jersey effect. It just doesn't look good the way it is right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrmet06 Posted January 1, 2008 Share Posted January 1, 2008 That's a stripe? I thought the pic was glitchy. Anyway, my recommendation would be to listen to everyone else's advice and use brighter colors on the base of the uniform to avoid the script blending in. Also, try sprucing it up and adding more color contrast (through piping, undershirts, etc.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RaysFTW Posted January 1, 2008 Author Share Posted January 1, 2008 Thank you for the comments. Remember guys these are just "concepts". Not the real jerseys that I will import in-game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redsox Posted January 1, 2008 Share Posted January 1, 2008 Can you provide us some in-game screenshots? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RaysFTW Posted January 2, 2008 Author Share Posted January 2, 2008 Here's something I've been working on. Suggestions would be good or maybe suggestions to upload. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bugmenot Posted January 2, 2008 Share Posted January 2, 2008 i like them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RaysFTW Posted January 2, 2008 Author Share Posted January 2, 2008 i like them Thanks a lot. I thought these look solid, but still need some work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RaysFTW Posted January 2, 2008 Author Share Posted January 2, 2008 These are not my designs, but I intend on finishing these. Take a look and see if you like. I could use some feedback, suggestions, requests, or anything else. Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ronmexico Posted January 2, 2008 Share Posted January 2, 2008 What video card do you use? I can't tell if it's that or the uniforms, hoping it's the vid card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HFLR Posted January 2, 2008 Share Posted January 2, 2008 Here's something I've been working on. Suggestions would be good or maybe suggestions to upload. Looks great but the sleeve without the logo looks to be of another color, maybe it would look better with a black undershirt. The royals one looks good too :wtg:! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redsox Posted January 2, 2008 Share Posted January 2, 2008 Overall, it definitely looks good, but I would suggest some minor changes here and there. I agree with HFLR in that the undershirt should be of a different color. Also, the patch on the sleeve is shifted to the left. It needs to be little more to the right. I think it would look better if you were to match the color of the belt to that of the hat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RaysFTW Posted January 2, 2008 Author Share Posted January 2, 2008 HFLR and RedSox, thank you for the suggestions and feedback. I changed the undershirt color, but I do like the helmet/hat color, so I left that. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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