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I recommend the following:

-Don't use EWR. Anyone can put together a better match than a piece of software can.

-Focus more on angles and storylines rather than matches. Fantasy booking is all about good angles.

-Don't do play by play of matches, unless it's an important match. A short general overview works well for most matches. But people like to read important matches like Main events for PPV's or the ending to a feud.

Also keep the following booking 101 ideas in mind at all times:

-Slow builds are great

-Basic 1 on 1 and tag matches work best. Leave multiple man matches and gimmick matches for Feud enders.

-Book backwards. Plan from the end of a storyline to the beginning.

thanks for the input, i was stopping using EWR to "write" my matches anyway. I might try a mix of long, medium, and shorter length on how much i put into the matches. What do you mean by slow builds, like WWE style? boring the first 5 minutes then a big ending? <_< jkjk

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-- TNA X Division Title Match!

10 Man Battle Royal—Jay Lethal, Homicide, Petey Williams, Chris Sabin, Alex Shelley, Eric Young, Kaz, Bryan Danielson, Matt Sydal, Christopher Daniels.

Christopher Daniels wins X-Division Title.

Elimination#1-Jay Lethal

Elimination#2-Petey Williams

Elimination#3-Homicide

Elimination#4-Eric Young

Elimination#5-Chris Sabin

Elimination#6-Matt Sydal

Elimination#7-Alex Shelley

Elimination#8-Kaz

Elimination#9-Bryan Danielson

Overall Rating: 70%

Crowd Reaction: 72%

Match Quality: 68%

Booker T is walking backstage. He is jumped by the Mystery Attacker! But Booker Fights back this time! They trade fists and booker manages to rip the attackers mask off, but we only see the back of his head as he runs off. Blonde hair, this narrows it down to a few suspects now.

Overall Rating: 91%

Middleast Nightmares vs Team 3D

No contest via run-in by Beer Money. LAX make the save.

Overall Rating: 82%

Crowd Reaction: 76%

Match Quality: 88%

Angle \ Cage are in the ring. Styles \ Joe come out onto the sound stage, and issue a challenge for a match tonight. Angle \ Cage accept, and the two teams trade insults for a while before leaving.

Overall Rating: 80%

Abyss vs Tomko

Abyss wins via pinfall from the Shock Treatment.

Overall Rating: 79%

Crowd Reaction: 72%

Match Quality: 86%

Scott Steiner is in the ring, and he wants a loser leaves the company match at Turning Point! Rhino comes out and asks why. Steiner replies with “I want you out of the company, I HATE you! I can barely stand to look at you, let alone be in the same building with you!” Rhino replies with, “You’re ON!” “But Scott…….make it a six sides of steel match!” Steiner agrees.

Overall Rating: 77%

Scott Steiner vs BG James w/Rhino

Steiner wins via tapout from the Steiner Recliner.

Overall Rating: 74%

Crowd Reaction: 75%

Match Quality: 75%

Booker T vs Hernandez

Hernandez wins via pinfall from the border toss.

Overall Rating: 79%

Crowd Reaction: 80%

Match Quality: 79%

Kevin Nash vs Sting

Kevin Nash wins by pinfall.

Overall Rating: 83%

Crowd Reaction: 89%

Match Quality: 72%

Styles \ Joe are backstage. They rip into Cage and Angle. Styles makes sure that everybody knows AJ is beyond mad. And if Angle gets another cheap win, there will be a price to pay.

Overall Rating: 88%

AJ Styles and Samoa Joe vs Christian Cage and Kurt Angle

Samoa Joe and AJ Styles win by Muscle Buster/Spiral Tap combination.

Overall Rating: 91%

Crowd Reaction: 90%

Match Quality: 92%

Overall Show Rating: 82%

Alright, did you like this presentation style? Yay or Nay? And I will be testing different styles over the next few shows to see what I and you the reader like the best. And if you want to see ANYTHING done differently, PLEASE tell me. I am doing this to entertain YOU guys! Not me lol.

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From a presentation point of view, it's excellent. It's easy to follow everything now. I like it a lot. From a booking point of view I do have a few issues. 1-Scott Steiner vs BG James would not be a 70's ratings match. That would be like a 40's maybe 50's ratings match. Both of them together would be pretty bad together. I'm not saying that it was a bad choice to have them face off since BG would be a fine guy to squash. All I'm saying is that it would a bad match. 2-Why is booker loosing to Hernandez? Booker is a semi main event guy involved in a storyline with a mystery opponent. Hernandez is just a Tag Team guy, and even if you want to protect Hernandez by not having him loose then he shouldn't be in the ring with Booker T.

The rest of the show was excellent. I'm interested to see where you go with the X-Division now that The Fallen Angel is at the top. And Angle/Cage Vs Joe/AJ should be pretty good too.

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where i went with the booker t loosing vs hernandez was, booker is thinking about the mystery attacker all the time, and wasnt focused on the match.

And i use EWR to rate the matches, soooooo, you'll have to take that up with the creator lol. Thanks for the input.

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TNA comes on the air to a camera panning over the Impact zone with fireworks going off. Jeremy Borash is in the ring and welcomes everybody to Turning Point. He says that there are some special guest in the Impact Zone tonight……….Bullet For My Valentine! They play a couple songs and Turning Point gets under way.

--Loser leaves the company match. Six sides of steel. Rhino vs Scott Steiner--

Before the match starts Jim Cornette comes out and explains that the loser of this match will be fired from TNA and will NEVER come back.

Rhino wins via pinfall by Gore. Scott Steiner has been fired and will leave the company immediately. After the match Steiner is pounding his fists on the mat as the crowd chants “Nah Nah Nah Nah, Nah Nah Nah Nah, HEY HEY HEY, GOOOOOOOD BYYYEEE!”

Rhino stays down after the match holding his left leg. Medics run down to the ring to check on him, they feel around on his leg. They have to help him up the ramp. We'll have more on Rhino's injury as soon as we get it.

Overall Rating – 83%

Crowd Reaction – 87%

Match Quality – 77%

--X-Division Title Match. Bryan Danielson vs Christopher Daniels--

Christopher Daniels retains via DQ. Kaz interferes and beats down Daniels and Danielson. Kaz grabs a mic and says, “I should be the X-Division champion! Im a man amongst boys! The wins you’ve gotten over me have all been flukes!” Kaz walks off with the X-Division title!

Overall Rating – 86%

Crowd Reaction – 76%

Match Quality – 97%

--TNA World Tag Team Match! Team 3D vs Beer Money vs Middle East Nightmares vs LAX—

Beer Money retains via pinfall. Beer Money smash beer bottles over Team 3D’s heads, and they are left a bloody mess in the ring.

Overall Rating – 81%

Crowd Reaction – 77%

Match Quality – 86%

--Singles. Sting vs Kevin Nash—

No contest due to double count out. Sting shakes hands with Nash after the match…But Nash gets floored by the Scorpion Death Drop!

Overall Rating – 83%

Crowd Reaction – 89%

Match Quality – 72%

--Singles. Booker T vs Mystery Attacker—

Booker T makes his usual entrance. Then the lights go out………the lights come back on. And Jeff Jarrett is standing behind Booker! The crowd goes wild and Booker slowly turns around and gets drilled with a guitar! Jeff Jarrett is Bookers attacker! Jarrett grabs a mic and says this match is for the TNA Legends Title!

Jarrett wins via pinfall from the Stroke.

Jarrett gets on the mic and explains why he came back the way he did. “Well, I’ve been watching from the sidelines for a couple years now, and its been painful not to be part of this company the way I want to, as a wrestler. And I didn’t want to come back just for me, I wanted to come back for YOU! The fans! I am back for GOOD!”

Overall Rating – 93%

Crowd Reaction – 98%

Match Quality – 83%

--Singles. Christian Cage vs Samoa Joe—

Christian Cage wins via Unprettier. Kurt Angle ran in and distracted the ref while Cage hit Joe with a chair. Angle and Cage shake hands afterwards.

Overall Rating – 95%

Crowd Reaction – 94%

Match Quality – 96%

Jeremy Borash catches up with Kurt Angle backstage and asks, “Why did you help Christian beat Joe?” Angle replies, “I’ve got my reasons. And you’ll find out sooner or later.”

Overall Rating – 93%

--TNA World Heavyweight Championship Match. NO DQ. A.J. Styles vs Kurt Angle--

Kurt Angle wins via Angle Slam on the stage. Christian comes in after the match and helps Angle put Styles through a table. Then Joe trys to make the save but ends up getting put through a table.

Overall Rating – 90%

Crowd Reaction – 91%

Match Quality – 89%

Cage and Angle grab a mic and say they are joining sides, and they are going to be called, “Angles Army.”

--Dark Match—Motor City Machine Guns vs Eric Young and Jay Lethal--

Motor City Machine Guns win via pinfall by ASCS Rush. Both teams stay in the ring after the match and stare each other down, security comes down to prevent an altercation.

Overall Rating – 81%

Crowd Reaction – 78%

Match Quality – 85%

Overall Show Rating – 88%

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Good stuff in the main event. I'm enjoying the AJ and Joe Vs Kurt and Christian feud. Not sure about firing Scott Steiner, but other than that awesome show.

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***Orlando, FL***

Rhino suffered a broken leg at Sundays pay per view. Rhino said he didn’t remember it breaking during the match, “It hurt a little bit during the match, but when the match ended and the adrenaline wore off, it hurt pretty bad.” Doctors have estimated Rhino will be out for at least 8 months. “It was a severe break of the tibia, and a fracture of the fibula. It is quite amazing to think he finished the match with a severe break as he had.” Rhino will undergo surgery later this week. And we wish him a quick recovery.

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ok, my brother overwrote this save with another save, but ill keep going. do you want me to continue in present day TNA or where i left off? and the reason for my not posting is real life finally caught up with me, just one thing after another and i just wanted to let you guys know i am still wanting to do this. thanks for those who are following.

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