BigJay:
Its pretty nice, im not going to comment on it because im 100% sure it will be red sox bias but I like what you did with it and theres nothing I would say should be fixed from my quick glimpse of if it.
*EDIT* after checking, Id say use the full alloted amount of pixels so we get more of the render, background, effects, etc, etc..
Are his brushes public or did he pm them to you? If they are public could you give me a link on where to get them, Id love to whip up some designs with them.